Persuading You to Read a Blog

My dear classmates, class of 2013. Not a lot of people read freshman blogs. Why? Maybe because we find that reading our classmates blog- because we are sophomores, that our blog is more amusing than the freshman. Who knows? Commenting on the freshman blogs will help them a lot with their future. They will start learning how to use complete sentences and also be more engage into the world of writing on web. Comment more on freshman blogs. Our criticism towards what we comment on their blog about what they have posted, will make them have more of a clearer mind of what to fix next time. Sooner or later the more we do that; they will start to see the mistakes in their writing and to also encourage them to keep writing and doing their assignments also. It is going to be very effective to the freshman to see that we have taken our time to read and comment on their blog post. So please, comment on the freshman blogs and encourage them to keep doing better. They really appreciate it even if it does not show.

Storybird- I Will Always Love You

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I Will Always Love You by chanda22, augustine25 on Storybird

TV Show Plot Diagram

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“Contents of the Dead Man's Pocket” Plot Change- Prompt A

Tom Benecke really needed the yellow sheet of paper, it was really important to him. If I was Tom, I would not even think about getting over the hedge to grab this important document. What I would have done differently was flash forwarding into thinking that,what if I can not make it back and I will of course be dead. Flash forward is a transition to a later event or scene that interrupts the normal chronological development of the story. I would have just went to the closes window to grab the paper or have someone or something help me, instead of risking my life.I would might even thinking about calling over some firefighters to help me out with their ladders; even if I have to buy one at Home Depot or something. II would still be happily living with my love one. Tom Benecke should have not gone through that if he would`ve tried doing what I have in mind.

Tv Show

I did not watch a tv show or wither a movie for the past weeks, literlly. So, the last thing I remember watching was The Bachelorette with Roberto and Ali. It was at a part where they were in Vienna. The beach was beautiful and they had a nice place to stay at there were bridges and lots of romance.

Free Write Blog Post

The first time I played Softball, was the second time I fell in love; just kidding. The other sports I played could not compare to Softball, even if I played other sports for as long as I can remember. My coaches are big inspirations to me, I remember when I tried out I thought I would not make it in the team. I was wrong, because of my strong arm and how fast I could run; saved me. Now, more than any sports in the world, I have to say I love Softball. I always thought Baseball/Softball was super boring, until I watched it on television and played it made me see it like the best entertainment in my life time.

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Today I went to work at 3:15 P.M. and got off at 4:55 P.M. to go to practice. The volleyball coaches were there and we knew today was going to be a long practice. I wasn`t all excited anymore because I was already tired from the running. Plus, P.E. made me even more tired because the nonstop exercise we did. The practice went on from 5:00 P.M. till 8:00 P.M. I was so exhausted and Hungary. All the drills we did today made my legs so sore, I felt like I was a noodle; but yet it was worth it. Luckily I didn`t have a lot of homework when I got home. I went straight to washing my hands and eating; a lot. I felt so bloated it made me look pregnant.

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