Showing posts with label poetry reflection. Show all posts
Showing posts with label poetry reflection. Show all posts

Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Portfolio - Improvement

Over the past two years, I have learned so much. In Freshman year and Sophomore year, two years with Ms. Priester. It amazes me how fast time flies, it is also saddens me. We learned how to write many different kind of essays. Freshman year, nothing but paper. Sophomore year, paperless!
My writing skills before high school was not great at all, I felt like the teachers could not explain how to write my essays, or even write. I remember getting very frustrated, sitting there trying to fix my format and especially my grammar. I would get a D of a C on my writing essays. Now they have changed since I have stepped into high school. I learned the right way! My grammar has become way better, my essay actually makes sense now, and there is actually a point being proven.
I also worked hard on my writing skills, almost everyday in Freshman year I would write in my journal. My spelling has always been very good, so I did not have to worry about that. To be honest, my reading skills were better in Freshman year than Sophomore year. I have been slacking on reading lately, but I am going to start reading a lot of books this Summer vacation. My reading skills now, sometimes makes me nervous. I get nervous to read out loud in class, because I haven’t read out loud in so long. I am going to improve my reading skills before Junior year hits.
My speaking skills before high school was okay, I was a little shy to present in front of my classmates. Such as, I would stutter, and fidget a lot, and I would just randomly speak to fast. Now, my speaking skills are very good, I speak with confidence now. Although, I like to talk fast most of the time and overlap my words; I still speak better than before. I think the reason I improve now, is because I know I am in high school and there would be a lot of presentations. To where I have to speak a lot, eventually I got comfortable and just went with the flow.
My group-work skills before high school were actually pretty decent. In a group we listen, talk, shared, and not only that we took turns and were respectful to one another. Now, they are more playing around. But, we still get our work done before class ends also. The reason why I don’t think it improve is because we are more of wanting to have fun, and more chatting with each other in a group-work. I had no technology skills what so ever. The only thing I knew how to do educationally on the computer is, typing in Microsoft Word, and emailing. Now my technology skills are incredible, thanks to Ms. Priester. The reason why I improve was because of Ms. Priester, I learned how to do so much things, it is ridiculous. So many things I have learned in two years, just of technology.
             In order to continue to improve my academic skills during the next two years and beyond, is that I will take what I learned from my teacher and use it. I will also learn on my own how to do other things too, because of knowing technology now will help in the future forever. I do want to give a big thanks to Ms. Priester.

Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Fourth Quarter Goals.

My greatest accomplishment of last quarter was getting my F that I had in Priester’s class up to an B. I was very proud of myself, I knew I could do it. Last quarter, was not my best and I also barely tired honestly. For me to achieve my goal to getting a B, I will finish all my missing assignments and I will also make sure to finish my work on time. For this quarter my goal is to stay off two hour and I really want to get rid of any C’s. For me to achieve it: I will study a lot, finish all work, be focus all the time.

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

CAHSEE Reflection

My reflection on my experience of taking the CAHSEE today was fine. I was scared at first, mostly about the essay section. Believe it or not, I think I did so great on the essay part that I could not stop smiling. All the other part of the test was tolerable. Most of the question was easy but the answers were dumb and obvious but it made you think what answer to pick. Plus, There were like two words that I have never seen or ever heard of. I am a little proud of myself, I am praying to past the CAHSEE; including the math section tomorrow. Becky has helped me look over math problems and a test that Fenick has made to prepare for the math part of the CAHSEE. I feel very positive but I am just afraid I would not even remember how to do the problems by tomorrow. I have to stay indubitable!

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Feelings about the CAHSEE


My feelings about taking the CAHSEE is that I feel like I am not 100% ready and I am scared of not passing the test at all. I am afraid of taking again next year if I don’t pass it this time. Writing the essay today as a practice, was a little okay but I still was a little shaky. I felt like I didn’t know what to do, when I was writing I didn’t think it made any sense at all. I am not looking forward to taking the test this year and I don’t know what to do now. I need more help. My classmates says it’s easy but to me it isn’t easy. I get nervous and one little mistake can ruin the whole test score. I feel sick knowing it’s coming up very soon, I did not prepare myself at all.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Sophomore Paragraph

To me, being a sophomore is a little lame. You're in the middle of High school and you are the one who does not get that much attention at all. Freshmen, juniors, and seniors get the most attention. To me, it also means we are one step closer to being juniors and I cannot wait for that time. I am tired of being a sophomore.

Thursday, February 10, 2011

"I am Offering This Poem" - Emotion

The emotion that “I am Offering This Poem” by Jimmy Santiago Baca expresses is warm, love, and a lot of caring. For example, the author kept saying “I love you”, to ensure the reader. This shows that he cares, and people out there who does not hear that often will understand that all you need is love. In addition, this makes me feel bubbly inside and makes me feel more better about myself. This also shows the author cares for the person who is reading it. That’s why the emotion of this poem is just love. All you need is love. <3

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

"Remember" Become a Poem Paragraph

Entering the poets world, I think she wrote this story/poem and published it because she wants people to really understand that life is not as bad as people think it is. Joy Harjo could have wrote this because some people may not appreciate life as much as life already gives them, and hopefully it changes their mind about life around them. For example, if I was the poet I would have published it to because I would want people to know everything around them and anything, is still also a part of them; no matter what it is. If I were to write a poem and published it to the world, I would have write about people who suffers with their life and make life seems so bad and wrong when it’s really not. You just have to make the best of it. This poem makes me feel more appreciative that I already am, it makes me understand more whats out there in life. Though sometimes things go wrong, you cannot always blame everything around you.

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

"Heart! We will forget him!" Paragraph

In the poem “Heart! We will forget him!”, the speaker speaks directly to her heart as if it was a person, the reason why she talked to her heart separately is because she might have felt as if talking to a non-living object will help her get over the guy and the heartbreak she was going through. She talked to her heart and mind, telling herself and her heart to forget him. Well, they probably had problems and could not work things out and it hurt her and him to forget each other and separated, but no matter how much she tried....she still could not forget about him; she still love him. Personification is giving human traits. Such as qualities, feelings, actions, and such things as characteristics to especially non-living objects. Such as things like colors, things, qualities, or ideas. The author uses personification toward her heart to cope because it helps her start believing and thinking she can control her heart by talking to it. One way I can relate to this poem is that I've been through the same thing. I also talked to my heart, but after all my heart does not want to listen. Maybe it should not listen to me.

Monday, January 24, 2011

Poetry Experience Paragraph

Studying poetry makes me very querulous because I am not great at writing poems. I know that poetry does not have to rhyme but it always tells a story and it always have such a strong meaning to it. I studies poetry in the past in elementary, like the nursery rhymes and in high school I have written poetry. Such as Acrostic, poetry Concrete poetry, Limericks, and Haiku. I like to read poetry for fun but I do not like writing poetry. I hope to major writing poems during this unit and have fun with it. I wish I could write good poems like other people. When I do, I can never rhyme.