Everybody knows my most memorable Valentine, of course who doesn't? Anyways, you already heard this story many times in one year and I am not going to mention it again. Who wouldn't brag about this? PROPS PROPS dear love. I wrote this post on 2/17 of 2010. So, I just copy and paste. Until then my Valentine story is going to be the same for another year
of course, because I am not planning on having another one anytime soon. :)
Here it is------------
Let me tell you..V-day was something I never thought would be one of the days where I can say it`s the day of my life. So blessed and grateful to have such a wonderful partner and who I can call a friend. His name is Joseph Jamal Bakhit. I honeslty can`t describe him, There are so many things he does that brightens my day. No matter if I just see him or just seeing him smile makes my days better.
His plans are pretty impresive and pretty crazy. On February 13, 2010 I went on a date, I consider it the first date and pretty sure the best I will ever have. I want to thank him for an amazing day. Anyways, we went to Seaport Village. I honeslty had teary eyed, I didn`t want him to see that but he should know he made me the happiest person. We hunged out all day and yeah it was something I can`t describe..but speechless is all I can say.
I started writing this since Monday but I don`t know if I wanted to post this anymore..but he should know how I feel.
Monday, February 14, 2011
Friday, February 11, 2011
My Lyric Poem
I am happy when I see you
I am happy when you laugh
I am happy when you smile
I am not happy when your sad
I am not happy when you cry
I am not happy when your mad
I am happy when you laugh
I am happy when you smile
I am not happy when your sad
I am not happy when you cry
I am not happy when your mad
Thursday, February 10, 2011
"I am Offering This Poem" - Emotion
The emotion that “I am Offering This Poem” by Jimmy Santiago Baca expresses is warm, love, and a lot of caring. For example, the author kept saying “I love you”, to ensure the reader. This shows that he cares, and people out there who does not hear that often will understand that all you need is love. In addition, this makes me feel bubbly inside and makes me feel more better about myself. This also shows the author cares for the person who is reading it. That’s why the emotion of this poem is just love. All you need is love. <3
"Remember" Homework paragraph
Line 19 through 22 has more meaning to what the author is trying to say. Those two statements are very logical in my opinion, it is true. What we do in life effects how life is, and also everything around us. For example, what if we did not go to school and no one worked...what would happen? Although, we are not literally the "universe", they mean everyone in the world. We would not have anything if it wasn't the universe and "us" in it. "Our culture, from language to dancing, comes from us". I do agree with the two statements being logical.I agree with what the author is trying to say, we have a future and we got to keep it going because we are important to the world around us, because we are the world's universe.
Wednesday, February 9, 2011
"Remember" Become a Poem Paragraph
Entering the poets world, I think she wrote this story/poem and published it because she wants people to really understand that life is not as bad as people think it is. Joy Harjo could have wrote this because some people may not appreciate life as much as life already gives them, and hopefully it changes their mind about life around them. For example, if I was the poet I would have published it to because I would want people to know everything around them and anything, is still also a part of them; no matter what it is. If I were to write a poem and published it to the world, I would have write about people who suffers with their life and make life seems so bad and wrong when it’s really not. You just have to make the best of it. This poem makes me feel more appreciative that I already am, it makes me understand more whats out there in life. Though sometimes things go wrong, you cannot always blame everything around you.
Tuesday, February 8, 2011
"Heart! We will forget him!" Paragraph
In the poem “Heart! We will forget him!”, the speaker speaks directly to her heart as if it was a person, the reason why she talked to her heart separately is because she might have felt as if talking to a non-living object will help her get over the guy and the heartbreak she was going through. She talked to her heart and mind, telling herself and her heart to forget him. Well, they probably had problems and could not work things out and it hurt her and him to forget each other and separated, but no matter how much she tried....she still could not forget about him; she still love him. Personification is giving human traits. Such as qualities, feelings, actions, and such things as characteristics to especially non-living objects. Such as things like colors, things, qualities, or ideas. The author uses personification toward her heart to cope because it helps her start believing and thinking she can control her heart by talking to it. One way I can relate to this poem is that I've been through the same thing. I also talked to my heart, but after all my heart does not want to listen. Maybe it should not listen to me.
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