Character: Kailey-Mai Crenshaw, 7 years old.
Character: Jordan ken Myatt, 8 years old.
Setting: Near the trailer at the beach, living in Idaho, Boise.
At rise: Kailey and Jordan laughing and smiling at each other.
Kailey: You're so funny! Your my best friend.
Jordan: Thanks your funny too. I like you.
Kailey: [blushing, she covers her face] I like you too Jordan.
Jordan: Can we kiss? I see my mommy and daddy do it all the time.
Kailey: I don't know how to...do you?
Jordan: We can try!
Kailey and Jordan: Mmmm..I don't know.
Kailey: Jinks you owe me a Sunny D!
Jordan: Awwe man! You win.
Kailey and Jordan playing in the sand, throws sand on her feet.
Kailey: [smiling] she looks at Jordan.
Silence...
Jordan kisses her.
Kailey: [gasp, starts laughing]
[Holding hands, they both laughed]
Awww, thats cute. I think that was one of the best one's I have read. Good job, I do wish this could have continued.
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