Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Portfolio - Improvement

Over the past two years, I have learned so much. In Freshman year and Sophomore year, two years with Ms. Priester. It amazes me how fast time flies, it is also saddens me. We learned how to write many different kind of essays. Freshman year, nothing but paper. Sophomore year, paperless!
My writing skills before high school was not great at all, I felt like the teachers could not explain how to write my essays, or even write. I remember getting very frustrated, sitting there trying to fix my format and especially my grammar. I would get a D of a C on my writing essays. Now they have changed since I have stepped into high school. I learned the right way! My grammar has become way better, my essay actually makes sense now, and there is actually a point being proven.
I also worked hard on my writing skills, almost everyday in Freshman year I would write in my journal. My spelling has always been very good, so I did not have to worry about that. To be honest, my reading skills were better in Freshman year than Sophomore year. I have been slacking on reading lately, but I am going to start reading a lot of books this Summer vacation. My reading skills now, sometimes makes me nervous. I get nervous to read out loud in class, because I haven’t read out loud in so long. I am going to improve my reading skills before Junior year hits.
My speaking skills before high school was okay, I was a little shy to present in front of my classmates. Such as, I would stutter, and fidget a lot, and I would just randomly speak to fast. Now, my speaking skills are very good, I speak with confidence now. Although, I like to talk fast most of the time and overlap my words; I still speak better than before. I think the reason I improve now, is because I know I am in high school and there would be a lot of presentations. To where I have to speak a lot, eventually I got comfortable and just went with the flow.
My group-work skills before high school were actually pretty decent. In a group we listen, talk, shared, and not only that we took turns and were respectful to one another. Now, they are more playing around. But, we still get our work done before class ends also. The reason why I don’t think it improve is because we are more of wanting to have fun, and more chatting with each other in a group-work. I had no technology skills what so ever. The only thing I knew how to do educationally on the computer is, typing in Microsoft Word, and emailing. Now my technology skills are incredible, thanks to Ms. Priester. The reason why I improve was because of Ms. Priester, I learned how to do so much things, it is ridiculous. So many things I have learned in two years, just of technology.
             In order to continue to improve my academic skills during the next two years and beyond, is that I will take what I learned from my teacher and use it. I will also learn on my own how to do other things too, because of knowing technology now will help in the future forever. I do want to give a big thanks to Ms. Priester.

Monday, June 6, 2011

Portfolio - Future

The way I feel about my future is great, confident.  My goals in the future is to go to College for four years if I am capable, work with NASCAR; if it happens. If it does not happen, I have other goals and plans. Such as being a Photographer, and or, Flight Attendant. I do not have a previous experience to help me reach my dream for NASCAR, but I will soon to meet with Lynn St. James crew. They would like to see if I have potential into a racing career, if I do; they would like to train me. So, they would be testing my driving skills in a low car first. I am super excited! I am not putting my hopes up to high because I know given opportunities, do not always work. But I also would not give up. My previous experiences that have helped me to prepare for my other goals is Photography. I own two cameras, I wish I own a professional one though. But, I have practiced taking a lot of pictures, and I also enjoy taking pictures a lot. I have also been in Photography class, for quite some time. Wanting to be a flight Attendant always seemed fun to me. The uniforms, just the professional look, and being able to travel everywhere. Plus, I love being on a plane. My number one goal in the future is to get into NASCAR one day, for me to continue to work on in order to achieve my goal. I will, do whatever it takes to get notice and drive a lot and become unafraid, I will continue to get more information also, join groups ETC. Currently the person who is helping me achieve my goal is my lovely CASA, Mary Fipp. She is so wonderful, not only because of the hook up she had given me. But also, she has always been there for me, she had and has big hopes for me, supported me in whatever I did, and cared for me like no one ever had before. Like I said earlier, I do not know if my dreams will come true, not too much of a high hope, but I will never give up.

Playwrights Project Play Performance Paragraph

If could only choose one word to describe how I felt during the performances is, excitement. The reason why I felt this way is because each little play/scene, has never made me feel bored. I was so into it, even though I was tired it kept me wide awake. It made me wanted to go up there an act! Although, I know I cannot act well at all. The actors were so good! Especially Steven,  he was my favorite actor, and the other guy; I do not know his name. This experience impacted me because  got to hear other peoples stories, it was very touching.

Tuesday, May 31, 2011

My Educational Experiences

When the world says, "Give up,"
Hope whispers, "Try it one more time."
Due to my educational experiences, I feel like I am  currently struggling in Math, and also in History. I have good grades right now, but I don’t feel like I can ever do it without help. Because missing a lot of school during fifth grade and sixth grade, I feel like I did not learn anything. It is also my fault for ditching school, but I have my own reasons. While going into seventh and eight grade, I had the worst grades. I did not know how to do a lot of things that other people have already knew and learned. I feel like during fifth grade and sixth is where you learn most of the things you start doing in seventh grade to high school. Even though I got in the system around that time, I remember not learning anything, there was no teaching. I remember how much I was struggling with school, because I did not know most of the things the teachers were teaching and saying. Eventually, when seventh grade started; I asked for tutors. Until around going into high school in the ninth grade, I knew I was doing bad so I tried to help myself by getting a few tutors every now and then. It actually helped me a lot for the upcoming things that we have been doing in school. Also, being at a school like San Pasqual Academy; I am actually learning.What I currently do now to keep me to be successful in school is checking my grades frequently, trying to get all my homework and classwork done. I also now, study for my tests.

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Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Free Write

I recently applied for Hot Topic and Fashion 5. I am super excited for either jobs if I do get hired. Especially Hot Topic, because I would want to dress up as if I really shopped there. It just sounds so fun to work there. Plus, I would most likely spend my first pay check there :) About Fashion 5, I don't really care to work there. I just really wanted a job at first, I didn't care what job I can get. Plus, I have never shopped at Fashion 5. I think if I did start working there, I would probably start shopping for my clothes there. I find it to fancy, plus I don't like dressing up into something I don't feel comfortable in.

Tuesday, May 24, 2011

Playwrights Project Play Completion Reflection

Now that my play is complete, I feel relieved. Like there’s nothing weighing on my shoulder anymore. I feel so good that I actually want to go outside at night, when 7:30 comes along. I remember struggling with writing my play because I had no idea what to write. I even cried because nothing came to my mind when Ms. Priester told us that we had to write a play. I was so frustrated! Even though I was working on different scenes than other people were, at least I turned it in on time. I am still a little upset that I did not get to proofread it myself, because I was rushing. I did not even get an adult to proofread my playwrights. Although, I did not get it corrected/proofread..I still believe I did really great on my play. Next week, watching the plays be performed by actors are going to be very exciting. At the same time I feel like I would be embarrassed by all my grammar and errors I had made that weren’t able to be fix at the time.

Monday, May 23, 2011

Free Write

I spent my weekend with my family. My 3 sisters and brother in law and I went hiking at Mission Valley. It was the longest hike I ever been to. I was so tired, we are all planning to do it every Sunday. I also got more tan lines on my body because I was wearing a sportsbra and shorts. I also saw my cousins there, they were already walking down from the hike. We were barely walking up. Next weekend, is Michael's birthday and it is his first birthday. I am super excited for him, the whole family is going to be there and friends. I might be able to see family members who I have not seen in years. So that's also exciting, I had a great weekend.

Monday, May 16, 2011

Field Trip

I went on a field trip with Beedle’s class to look at our school’s art at the County of Education. Everyone took pictures, ammired the artworks. It was cool to see how much talent our classmates have. After, we went to the Museum of Contemporary Art. It was my favorite part of the trip, the art were amazing and very interesting. My favorite art piece was the Donkey, they had a real donkey sitting in he middle of the room. Lastly, we went to the La Jolla beach and ate lunch. We saw Seagulls, Seals, different kind of birds. It was a chill day, I would do it again.

Friday, May 13, 2011



-What do you want to read about in the next scene of my play?
-What is the best part of my scene?
-What could I add to this scene to make it better?

Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Kids in the Mud Scene

Scene one

Character: Kailey-Mai Crenshaw, 7 years old.

Character: Jordan ken Myatt, 8 years old.

Setting: Near the trailer at the beach, living in Idaho, Boise.

At rise: Kailey and Jordan laughing and smiling at each other.

Kailey: You're so funny! Your my best friend.
Jordan: Thanks your funny too. I like you.
Kailey: [blushing, she covers her face] I like you too Jordan.
Jordan: Can we kiss? I see my mommy and daddy do it all the time.
Kailey: I don't know how to...do you?
Jordan: We can try!
Kailey and Jordan: Mmmm..I don't know.
Kailey: Jinks you owe me a Sunny D!
Jordan: Awwe man! You win.
Kailey and Jordan playing in the sand, throws sand on her feet.
Kailey: [smiling] she looks at Jordan.
Silence...
Jordan kisses her.
Kailey: [gasp, starts laughing]
[Holding hands, they both laughed]

Sunday, May 8, 2011

Summarize, Paraphrase, and Quote Peers’ Posts

Summary 
This is a summary of [Heather's W]'s blog post titled [UnGoogleable Research- What I Already Know]. To access the full post, click here. Heather wrote about her Marriage, and what she already knew about it. Heather does not agree with wedding rings because she thinks that if the people are committed in a relationship and love each other; why do they have to have wedding rings to show it. Other than that, she does not really know anything about marriage except that you wear rings when you're married, and she wants to learn the history of marriage.

Paraphrase 
This is a paraphrase of a section of [Rebekah M.]'s blog post titled [Comment-Seeking Post]. To access the full post, click here. Rebekah has been having a hard time back and home. She now works at Foot Locker, she really enjoys her job; because it's fun and her boss is very funny. It is also very hard for her to go to work at the same time because she has homework from school. She tries very hard to catch up with old homework.

Quote 
This is a quote of a section of [Amy C]’s blog post titled [Comment-Seeking Post]. To access the full post, click here"I don't why people will go back out if they already broke up and tried to be together, but it didn't work out. I can go on with this list, but the point is most relationships on campus don't workout."

Thursday, May 5, 2011

Quote, Summary, or Paraphrase Paragraph

Welcome students! Today, I am going to teach you about how to record evidence, when to summarize and what a summary is, when to use a quote and what a quote is, and when to paraphrase and what a paraphrase is. Evidence is a text that you found in a reliable source that will help to answer your focus question. Summary is a long section of text, you would want to use it when it is a short written paragraph. It is to retell the main ideas in the story, using fewer words. You want to use a quote if it is a short an simple section of text that you can find easily to t in your own words. Quote is something that someone said and you will have to use theses signs “ “. Paraphrase is ti retell the ides using your on words, you would want to use it if it a short and simple section of text that you can easily put in your own words. To help you remember this, I highly recommend you study.

Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Comment-Seeking Post

Leaving significance, meaningful blog comments are done like this. Before I go onto examples, blog comments should be appropriate. Meaningful blog comments should be helpful to the person who had written the post. While you help yourself,it help others. Also, do not be mean and write mean comments; always positive! Includes great punctuation, grammar, spelling, etc..For example, “I don’t entirely agree with your opinion on Osama Bin Laden’s death, should not be celebrated. Do you ever think how big their celebration has been, when 9/11 happened. Oh, also many of our troops dead. What did they do? Celebrated! You know they were celebrating big time”! Another example, “From your post, I learned that I should be nice to people when they’re trying to help me, and not push them away and give bad attitude. Please post nice, helpful, smart,  blog comments on your classmates blogs.

Monday, May 2, 2011

President Obama’s Big Announcement

       To learn about Osama bin Laden’s death, I read an article online from a website call Fredericksburg. Here is the link to the article that I read, it has too pages by the way. I learned from the past of what he did, how many people were killed and how he was such a bad bad person. The article I read talks about the excitement and surprise of Bin Laden’s death. They mentioned that it is wrong to celebrate someones death, but Bin Laden’s is so acceptable. I agree! They compared him to Adolf Hitler. I also watched the news too. I watch where our president Obama announced on Sunday that Osama Bin Laden is dead. People on the news are talking about how great the Navy Seals did and also gave a lot of credit to the president. They mentioned how the other day, Obama pulled out his birth certificate to prove people and then Sunday, he comes out of no where with the best announcement that the most wanted terrorist is killed. By the way, I don't like capitalizing his name.
       In the second paragraph, I want you to write about one or a few changes that you predict will happen as a result of his death.  After everything, like the articles and watching the news I think that worst things are going to happen. I predict that there are going to be more terrorists and the anger they have for us now for killing Bin Laden, are going to be bad. We will need more troops, I feel like sooner or later they’re going to attack us. I hope that everything will cool down after all this that had happened. I wish the war was over! We are really a huge target now! I just want to end it with this. For some people on Facebook that I know who are saying that "Shame on you America". Shame on you for thinking that it is "rude" that we are celebrating his death, everyone's happy. He was a terrorist for goodness sakes. Learn what happen before you stand up for Osama Bin Laden, learn what he did. Plus, you are an American! Many Troops died, much money was spent to find him, people and families lost their lives because of this monster! He's a shame! Shoot, if I was alive when Hitler died, you know for dang sure i'll be celebrating his death like i'm celebrating Osama's death now! 
-Sorry for the anger.

Sunday, May 1, 2011

Posters in the Hall

Do I think that it is wrong that SPA students just post the words of Caucasian men in our halls? It depends, it you’re thinking that it’s wrong. I do not find it wrong, I don’t think anything of it, maybe the students just went to Google or something and just type in “inspirational quotes”,  and that’s what popped up. I do not think that they specifically looked for words of Caucasian mens. If they did do it on purpose and did not include any other races, yes it’s super wrong. I do not think they did it on purpose, maybe they weren’t thinking.

Thursday, April 28, 2011

CST Testing Reflection

Taking the CST’s so far was super boring. There were only a few questions that I actually knew the answer to. Everything else made my mind go crazy so I just took a smart guess. I have not finish testing everything yet, tomorrow I have to take another portion of Biology. I get tired really quick while I am testing, that’s why I stand up once in awhile so I won’t fall asleep. I hate testing period, it makes me moody the whole day. The questions on the Biology part, was things that we have been learning recently, but I barely remember anything. I should have paid more attention more in class.

Monday, April 18, 2011

My Feelings about the Upcoming CSTs

Next week, I am taking the California Standardized Testing (CST). I feel really unplanned. I am always afraid of taking test that I have not studied directly. But, I know I will at least try my best to pass and be very focus for the test. I will think good thoughts. I had experience many experiences where I was not prepared for my test to where I was so frustrated and guessed through the test. The upcoming test makes me feel sick inside my stomach. I do not even want to think about the test, I heard that in the California Standardized Testing has Science in it. I do not even remember what I did in middle school.

Free Choice Blog Post

This weekend I went to the temple with my family. I felt awkward because I haven’t been there since I got taken away from the system. But, at same time it felt good, refreshing. After the ceremony and stuff we ate a lot of food and got blessed from the monks. I visited my aunt’s an grandpa’s ashes in the temple. I felt really tense at on point because I was holding them. After the temple we went home and cook and had a barebeque with the family. I love seeing all my nephews and neices, they’re growing up so fast! I barely remember their names, there are so many newborns.

Thursday, April 14, 2011

Playwrights Project Inspired by Music Paragraph

Today in class, we listen to music to inspire creative play writings. I really like it, it was fun. When I closed my eyes, I can see whats happening in my play. The music helped me, it just came to me naturally; it was like a movie. There was actually a part where I kept my eyes closed and typed, keeping my eyes closed at one point scared me. While listening to the music, I became scared because the things I was imagining was scary and it was so detailed, especially with the scary music in the background. Afterward, I felt really good because I got a compliment from Ms. Cindy, she said “You know, you’re really good at this; making up plays”.

Monday, April 11, 2011

UnGoogleable Research Paper Website Selection Reflection

Today in class, I search for my resources in many different search engines. To search for websites, I type in “Central Intelligence Agency”. When I found a website related to my focus question, I knew it was the right one because it had a lot of information and detailed things. I knew some of the websites I found were unacceptable because they had a lot of people’s opinion on the page and many advertisements. The websites I selected are good because they were from .gov. Tomorrow, I expect Ms. Priester will tell me to choose this and that websites because they’re great resources. Although, Ms. Priester will say, "We need to reword your focus question", I still did a good job.

Third Quarter Awards Review

The award assembly was at the auditorium and a lot of people receive awards and there was a lot of people there to support. One part of the assembly that I really like was when they had called up the people who had 3.0 and higher. They receive $25 and 4.0 people receive more. The exciting part for me was people going up to get their rewards for having a 4.0 and they also get a ticket to go to Knotts Berry Farm. I was getting very bored though I was happy for the people who got awards. The only award I receive was for Key Club.

Thursday, April 7, 2011

UnGoogleable Research – What I Already Know

My focus question is “After retiring from the CIA, do the retired agents have to continue their confidential manners?”. I barely have any clue of what happens after retirement. You can retire but, before you retire you have to have a replacement to take your spot. I also know that it takes a couple of months to go through the process. I have no idea about the agents continuing their confidential manners after retiring. By doing my research soon, I hope to learn what happens to their life after the CIA. I also want to know the benefits they get afterward and their stories of their experiences.

UnGoogleable Research Website Evaluation Chart

“Switch” Play Audience Member Experience

My experience as an audience member at the Playwrights Project play “Switch” was not that great in my opinion. The scenes were real but I did not feel for it. It made me a little angry that the scenes in the play didn’t have really anything related to me. I wish the play was more like my life story. Other than that, the actors were really great! Especially, the boy with he green shirt, he could act in different personality. Some parts in the play made me very angry but at the time I kept it to myself. Instead of paying attention to the play I found myself reminiscing my past and how much I grown from everything.

Tuesday, April 5, 2011

UnGoogleable Research Paper – Website Evaluation Tips

I asked people questions about how to find good research websites for my paper. I wanted to know about what happens after retiring from the CIA, do the retired agents have to continue their confidential manners and how does having the CIA affect our society? I chosen that because I have always been so interested in the CIA, and I always wanted to be one. I researched a lot about it a few years ago and I know the requirements and what can happen. It suddenly made me think about what happens after you retire and how serious it affects our society. An adult that I interviewed is my house parent Debbie. She said, “I really don’t know, I go to a site that is related to my topic and when I look through it, it is clear, easy to understand, and makes sense”. The second adult I interviewed is my house parent Bob. He said, “I think the most informative”. An upperclassman that I interviewed is Lorelye R. She said, “If it has .edu or .org or .gov”. The advice these people have given me will help me to write my research paper because I am now aware of what to search and what not to search.

Testing Tips Poster

Thursday, March 31, 2011

Fourth Quarter Kickoff Reflection

My experience with the Fourth Quarter Kickoff was cloying. I was on team 2, we played all different type of things that I do not like to categorize under the names of sports. Before playing sports, the Sophomore class had to watch a movie call Stand and Deliver-great movie. We went to lunch after the movie and everyone then disappear into their own groups/ teams. My team played wiffle ball, it was suppose to be Softball. So boring! I was actually trying to prevent from playing. Of course, Ms. Priester kept galvanizing me into playing. We played other things that are too boring to waste my time to write. At the end of the day, I was so drain and the team that won is..........Team 6!. Plus very lame, I had practice after all that.

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Tuesday, March 29, 2011

Fourth Quarter Goals.

My greatest accomplishment of last quarter was getting my F that I had in Priester’s class up to an B. I was very proud of myself, I knew I could do it. Last quarter, was not my best and I also barely tired honestly. For me to achieve my goal to getting a B, I will finish all my missing assignments and I will also make sure to finish my work on time. For this quarter my goal is to stay off two hour and I really want to get rid of any C’s. For me to achieve it: I will study a lot, finish all work, be focus all the time.

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Friday, March 18, 2011

What I learned in the Third Quarter of English 10

Please click the link below to view a blog jog of my learning:
What I learned in the Third Quarter of English 10

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Thursday, March 17, 2011

What I Learned in the Third Quarter of English 9/10

This third quarter I learned a lot. I learned about symbolism, allegory, poetry, imagery, figurative language, primary source, and also secondary source. My favorite thing to learn was symbolism and figurative language. Those were my favorite to learn because I like representing things using symbols and an assignment with figurative language in it are always fun. Some subjects and assignments were a little confusing and challenging but it was just alright. I like this quarter, I believe I did better this quarter than last quarter which was second quarter. The thing I did not understand that much was allegory. I always dislike doing the graphic organizers, I hate those. I am not so great at doing those, maybe that's why I don’t like it. Other than that, this quarter has been awesome.

Friday, March 11, 2011

“Where Have You Gone, Charming Billy?” Breaking News

Today, April 13, 1968. In Vietnam, a solider name Billy Boy Watkins deceased from the fright of dying. Supposedly the solider has stepped on a land mind and he got badly hurt. The injure did not kill him, but what killed him was the fear of dying even though he was getting help. The stress and fright he had made him have a heart attack. For all the soldiers out there we are still praying for you to come back home safely with your family. There will b a service soon and he will be missed dearly. We love our soldiers! next story will coming up very soon........

Tuesday, March 8, 2011

CAHSEE Reflection

My reflection on my experience of taking the CAHSEE today was fine. I was scared at first, mostly about the essay section. Believe it or not, I think I did so great on the essay part that I could not stop smiling. All the other part of the test was tolerable. Most of the question was easy but the answers were dumb and obvious but it made you think what answer to pick. Plus, There were like two words that I have never seen or ever heard of. I am a little proud of myself, I am praying to past the CAHSEE; including the math section tomorrow. Becky has helped me look over math problems and a test that Fenick has made to prepare for the math part of the CAHSEE. I feel very positive but I am just afraid I would not even remember how to do the problems by tomorrow. I have to stay indubitable!

Monday, March 7, 2011

“Where Have You Gone, Charming Billy?” Enlist Paragraph

Long time ago I wanted to join the Air Force and the Army. There are a lot of reasons why I wanted to actually be in the Military period. I wanted to be hardcore and strong HA HA. But then I changed my mind because I have been told by my brother in law and cousins that it is not that great and there are many risk. Plus, I do not want to be away from my child for months and years. That is why my brother in law took a long break out of the Army. He wanted to spend time with his wife and watch his son grow, he did not want to miss anything. I support him. Watching him go and come back is very hard and especially on my sister. Plus, I have other dreams I want to accomplish; such as NASCAR, CIA, or SWAT. If I was ever drafted, I would probably go through with it.

Thursday, March 3, 2011

Primary and Secondary Sources Comparison

Primary and secondary sources both have in common is that they both expresses itself with the same information but just in a different way, in events and viewpoints. Primary source makes it different from secondary is that primary is firsthand account of an event. Such as if the person was literally there. A few examples of primary sources are speeches, oral histories, eyewitness news report, interviews, literary works, pubic documents, this such as that. Secondary sources is different because it is express in a secondhand account, it is written by a writer who did not participate directly in the events, they are not literally there. A few examples of secondary sources are encyclopedias, biographies, reference books, history books, magazine articles. Primary and secondary sources are helpful because it expresses many viewpoints in different ways such as first-hand person and second-hand person.

Wednesday, March 2, 2011

Feelings about the CAHSEE


My feelings about taking the CAHSEE is that I feel like I am not 100% ready and I am scared of not passing the test at all. I am afraid of taking again next year if I don’t pass it this time. Writing the essay today as a practice, was a little okay but I still was a little shaky. I felt like I didn’t know what to do, when I was writing I didn’t think it made any sense at all. I am not looking forward to taking the test this year and I don’t know what to do now. I need more help. My classmates says it’s easy but to me it isn’t easy. I get nervous and one little mistake can ruin the whole test score. I feel sick knowing it’s coming up very soon, I did not prepare myself at all.

Thursday, February 24, 2011

"Ex- Basketball Player " Paragraph

Athletics in school are important to me because it keeps you in shape and also if you want to go pro in a sport in the future as a career, it will be easier because you are experienced. It prepares for young people in life a lot. It mostly depends who you’re and what you want to do. For example, especially for boys they would want to be a Basketball player, Football player, and or Baseball player. Playing sports in high school will prepare you and automatically you’re good enough to play pro. Additionally, people get injuries over injuries and its hard to stick what you want to do, there are risk. It is important to me, as a female. If I did not have my dream jobs I could even go pro in Softball and Volleyball, it just depends. I could play in college and everything. It has many good things about athletics as a young person in life, especially in the future.

Google Moderator Questions and Answers

Do you think that people set very high expectations for themselves that are unrealistic? Why.
-I think that some people set very high expectations for themselves that are way unrealistic because people who don't even try won't make it. Plus, a lot of people have other plans in life and also gives up easily.


Does this make you want to change your dream job to something more achievable?
-I am sticking to my dream job no matter what. Unless there was something going on with my family lives that I need to help with first. Other than that, I am going to stick with my plan.


Why did John Updike write the poem?
-I think John Updike wrote this peom for people to think about and realize that things you planned and dreamed of aren't always going to come out as the way you want it to. You have to keep trying and work hard.


What do you think happened to Flick, why do you think he didn't become a Pro- NBA star?
-I think that Flick did not become a Pro-NBA star, maybe because he had given up after highschool and things went wrong and he didn't have any motivation or support.


After reading the poem does it change your prospective on which is more important.(Yes,No) Why?
-After reading the poem it made me realize somg things like, setting your goals and sticking with it but things can come up that might ruin things.

Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Persuading You to Read a Blog

My dear classmates, class of 2013. Not a lot of people read freshman blogs. Why? Maybe because we find that reading our classmates blog- because we are sophomores, that our blog is more amusing than the freshman. Who knows? Commenting on the freshman blogs will help them a lot with their future. They will start learning how to use complete sentences and also be more engage into the world of writing on web. Comment more on freshman blogs. Our criticism towards what we comment on their blog about what they have posted, will make them have more of a clearer mind of what to fix next time. Sooner or later the more we do that; they will start to see the mistakes in their writing and to also encourage them to keep writing and doing their assignments also. It is going to be very effective to the freshman to see that we have taken our time to read and comment on their blog post. So please, comment on the freshman blogs and encourage them to keep doing better. They really appreciate it even if it does not show.

Sophomore Paragraph

To me, being a sophomore is a little lame. You're in the middle of High school and you are the one who does not get that much attention at all. Freshmen, juniors, and seniors get the most attention. To me, it also means we are one step closer to being juniors and I cannot wait for that time. I am tired of being a sophomore.

Friday, February 18, 2011

Similes + Metaphors + Personification = Figurative Language

Metaphors:
1. Love is a fluid container, it can overflow.
2. Hate is a cold ice on my heart.
3. Life is a stained-glass window filled with color.
4. Friendship is the pot of gold at the end of every rainbow.

Similes:
1. Community meeting is like a thunder storm that never ends.
2. Passes are like being in Hawaii.
3. The gym is like my housemates voices.
4. My house is like a nice sunny day.

Personification:
1. The moon flew into my window.
2. The flower smiled into the sun.
3. The phone was jailed and sentenced for months.
4. The car flew across the race track.

Thursday, February 17, 2011

SPA Poem

You would think we would have love between us all
But how could there be when there are no trust?
It’s not realize that opportunities was knocking at our door
they won’t get a job but just do chores
even before it was the one, mostly ignored

We have exits and entrances
take the chances
do not just take glances

Her life passed her by
and you know she didn’t even try?
Time will creep up on you
and don’t you boo,
because you did not make it through

Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Tuesday, February 15, 2011

Free Choice Blog Post

I've been going to Softball conditioning since the first day it had started, and I only had missed one. I am super super excited for this upcoming Softball tryout. I cannot wait for the season to start. I been practicing a lot lately and last year I remember, I could not hit any balls at all. But this year, is going to change. I can now hit out very far into the outfield! Lately on weekends I go to the Softball field by myself and look at every detail of everything around me. The trees near the Softball field has something mysterious to it, it makes me stare for what it seems to be hours. Chucking the ball into the fence when I am angry helps me a lot. I get very irritated when someone comes onto the Softball field when I want to be alone. Softball became my true love, it was like love at first play. I am going to prove people this year that I can hit more home runs than just one from last year. I love the sound of when the ball hits my bat. It just goes *PING*! and there goes a smile on my face. :)

"Grape Sherbet" Blog post 2011

In the poem “Grape Sherbet”, they tell a story about a time they remembered. Reminiscing on a love one in the past who has deceased. They are celebrating a time where they were making grape sherbet and the girls father was cooking. Her father is the one who had past away. I can relate to this poem a lot because there was a time where my family and I were celebrating and a song came on that he used to sing all the time and also his favorite food was being served. The phrases that help me imagine this poem is when it says “After the grill dad appears with his masterpiece. We cheer.” This shows the celebration and happiness of the day. Imagery helps the reader to imagine the event and it helps the reader relate.

Monday, February 14, 2011

Favortite Food Brainstorm for "Grape Sherbert".

Wordle: Spaghetti

Memorable Valentine's Day

Everybody knows my most memorable Valentine, of course who doesn't? Anyways, you already heard this story many times in one year and I am not going to mention it again. Who wouldn't brag about this? PROPS PROPS dear love.  I wrote this post on 2/17 of 2010. So, I just copy and paste. Until then my Valentine story is going to be the same for another year 
of course, because I am not planning on having another one anytime soon. :)
Here it is------------


Let me tell you..V-day was something I never thought would be one of the days where I can say it`s the day of my life. So blessed and grateful to have such a wonderful partner and who I can call a friend. His name is Joseph Jamal Bakhit. I honeslty can`t describe him, There are so many things he does that brightens my day. No matter if I just see him or just seeing him smile makes my days better. 

His plans are pretty impresive and pretty crazy. On February 13, 2010 I went on a date, I consider it the first date and pretty sure the best I will ever have. I want to thank him for an amazing day. Anyways, we went to Seaport Village. I honeslty had teary eyed, I didn`t want him to see that but he should know he made me the happiest person. We hunged out all day and yeah it was something I can`t describe..but speechless is all I can say.

I started writing this since Monday but I don`t know if I wanted to post this anymore..but he should know how I feel.

Friday, February 11, 2011

My Lyric Poem

I am happy when I see you
I am happy when you laugh
I am happy when you smile

I am not happy when your sad
I am not happy when you cry
I am not happy when your mad

Thursday, February 10, 2011

"I am Offering This Poem" - Emotion

The emotion that “I am Offering This Poem” by Jimmy Santiago Baca expresses is warm, love, and a lot of caring. For example, the author kept saying “I love you”, to ensure the reader. This shows that he cares, and people out there who does not hear that often will understand that all you need is love. In addition, this makes me feel bubbly inside and makes me feel more better about myself. This also shows the author cares for the person who is reading it. That’s why the emotion of this poem is just love. All you need is love. <3

"Remember" Homework paragraph

Line 19 through 22 has more meaning to what the author is trying to say. Those two statements are very logical in my opinion, it is true. What we do in life effects how life is, and also everything around us. For example, what if we did not go to school and no one worked...what would happen? Although, we are not literally the "universe", they mean everyone in the world. We would not have anything if it wasn't the universe and "us" in it. "Our culture, from language to dancing, comes from us". I do agree with the two statements being logical.I agree with what the author is trying to say, we have a future and we got to keep it going because we are important to the world around us, because we are the world's universe.

Wednesday, February 9, 2011

"Remember" Become a Poem Paragraph

Entering the poets world, I think she wrote this story/poem and published it because she wants people to really understand that life is not as bad as people think it is. Joy Harjo could have wrote this because some people may not appreciate life as much as life already gives them, and hopefully it changes their mind about life around them. For example, if I was the poet I would have published it to because I would want people to know everything around them and anything, is still also a part of them; no matter what it is. If I were to write a poem and published it to the world, I would have write about people who suffers with their life and make life seems so bad and wrong when it’s really not. You just have to make the best of it. This poem makes me feel more appreciative that I already am, it makes me understand more whats out there in life. Though sometimes things go wrong, you cannot always blame everything around you.

Remember-Wordle

Wordle: Remember

Tuesday, February 8, 2011

"Heart! We will forget him!" Paragraph

In the poem “Heart! We will forget him!”, the speaker speaks directly to her heart as if it was a person, the reason why she talked to her heart separately is because she might have felt as if talking to a non-living object will help her get over the guy and the heartbreak she was going through. She talked to her heart and mind, telling herself and her heart to forget him. Well, they probably had problems and could not work things out and it hurt her and him to forget each other and separated, but no matter how much she tried....she still could not forget about him; she still love him. Personification is giving human traits. Such as qualities, feelings, actions, and such things as characteristics to especially non-living objects. Such as things like colors, things, qualities, or ideas. The author uses personification toward her heart to cope because it helps her start believing and thinking she can control her heart by talking to it. One way I can relate to this poem is that I've been through the same thing. I also talked to my heart, but after all my heart does not want to listen. Maybe it should not listen to me.

Heart Broken Wordle

Wordle: Heart broken

Monday, February 7, 2011

My Experience with Teaching the Class

My experience today, teaching the class felt amazing. I felt cool, and I also felt smarter. There was one thing that I missed. Like, forgetting to put the page number to the poem. Luckily, my awesome partner remembered the page number by heart. Other than that everything went well and flowed easily. Chelsea and I walked around and help our classmates, or I can say “our students”. The classwork assignment went smooth, the partners seem to understand the discussion questions easily and I also really enjoyed helping and teaching for a day. If I can do it again, I totally would! I like this lesson plan, to teach our classmates. Fun!

Sunday, February 6, 2011

Imagery in a Song

The name of the song that I chose to represent my life is call “Photographs & memories” by Jason Reeves. An image that has a meaningful picture to me is “the picture”. This song is sad but it also gives me a great feeling inside. Another image that has meaning to me is the memories, there are memories that goes with pictures and memories are just the best because they’re the only thing that does not change when the people does. When I hear this song I feel happy but I also sometimes cry a lot. Theres also different kinds of memories too, I used to have this song on repeat in the car with my sister Sammie.

   “Photographs & memories” by Jason Reeves.
I keep your picture by my bed
For when I'm feeling sad, I don't know why I would be
The way your smile looks so real
I feel like I could start to understand your grace

But I, I don't understand why you're not here with me
And I, I don't even wanna know where else you'd be

'Cause I have photographs and memories of the times
You weren't on my mind and I was alone
I have poetry and drawings of my life
You weren't on my side and I didn't know
Just what is love

Writing moments on the wall with different colors
Keeps my mind away from missing you
And I can't wait to fall asleep to slip into my dreams
Where we can dance upon a star

And I be as patient as a boy in love could ever be
And I don't feel like I was real until you were a part of me

'Cause I have photographs and memories of the times
You weren't on my mind and I, I was alone
And I have poetry and drawings of my life
You weren't on my side and I didn't know
Just what is

I need you back, I need you back, I need you here
I need your smile, I need your eyes, I need you, dear
Every line on your face makes a beautiful maze
For my eyes to trace
Every line on your face makes a beautiful maze
For my eyes to trace

I have photographs and memories of the times
You weren't on my mind and I was alone

Thursday, February 3, 2011

“A Storm in the Mountains” One with Nature

When I was younger, my father and I always went to the beach after he has just argued with my mother. I held his hand and he had me step on his feet while he taught me how to dance, holding me. I can see the water rocking back and forth and white seagulls. I can hear and feel the strong wind blowing through the ocean and the sand; giving me chills. I touch my dad’s hand and I felt the wind blew right through me. While still dancing with him he told me, “One day, I won’t be here. You have to promise me to be strong, stand up for yourself even if you get scared. Do good in school and respect your elders. When you feel the wind, and when you hear it...it is me calling out for you. You don’t have to worry, im always here”. I always feel like I belong with the wind. When it blows I want to cry, but I also smile. I love the wind.

Wednesday, February 2, 2011

Paragraph to Persuade You to Read My Poem

The name of the poem I am teaching is call “Same Song” by Pat Mora. Someone should read my poem because it is about confidence inside and out. Having beauty and not having beauty. Someone who needs inspiration with something. Someone who can feel pretty and others feel ugly. This poem is about “looking good”. Looking good where you cake on your makeup or when you just woke up from bed. Someone may not want to read this poem because they may feel angry or insecure of how they look. They should read this poem anyways because of somethings they should hear about the little girl does to change how she feels and look. The best part of the poem to me, is when the little girl cakes on her makeup, dresses up and curls her hair then only realizing at the end it looked horrible.

Form to your Discussion Questions

Tuesday, February 1, 2011

Imagery in a Selected Poem Paragraph

In the poem “Life Goes On” by Tarna the mood that the imagery creates is inspirational, sad, but yet has a lot of hope and it creates a happy mood at the end. An example of imagery in this poem is when she says “The rain will fall the snow will sparkle, the tree's will blow and the birds will sing, children will dance flowers will grow, music will ring and tears will flow, ice will melt and memories felt”. This poem shows all five senses that are concluded in imagery. It shows: Sight because you can see rain and snow sparkle, the tree, birds, children's, flowers, tears, and ice. Sounds, you can hear the rain fall, tree’s blowing, bird’s singing, children's, and music. Smell because you can smell rain, and flowers. Taste, you can taste the rain and snow. Touch, you can feel the rain, snow, trees, birds, flowers, and ice. The feelings that the image created for me was sadness and it slowly turned into faith, courage, and I felt inspired. I suddenly felt happy again. The use of imagery helps to express feelings because it helps us understand their feelings in a better way and we can actually see, hear stuff, etc.

Imagery in a Selected Poem


View my graphic organizer in a larger size.
I cannot display the poem here, here is the link to the poem.

Saturday, January 29, 2011

Dream House Paragraph with Imagery

My dream house would be something like a cabin. I see couches, a TV, the walls, glass tables, chairs, my husband on the computer, and the whole living room is just white. The items in the house feels calm and relaxing, it feels like the oceans breeze. It feels like love, happiness, and peace. Walking through the kitchen I smell Spaghetti, macaroni and cheese, and crispy garlic bread. I hear the soft slow RnB music coming from upstairs and the typing from the keyboard, I hear my baby boy crying. I will save money, work and work and including my husbands support by working to help get our nice beautiful house.

I have a couple pictures of a house that is on sale and that I always wanted. This is my dream house. I got to show it off. :) This is actually a steel aluminum glass house.